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How to use Apply to moistened skin and gently massage in light, circular motions toward the centre of the face. Rinse thoroughly with cool water. Repeat if removing heavy makeup or sunscreen. Follow with Rejuvenating Manuka Hydrosol, Pure Organic Radiance Serum and Antioxidant Face Cream for optimal care and nourishment.
Ingredients (Vegan) Purified water (Aqua), Aloe barbadensis leaf juice, Sodium stearate, Stearic acid, Caprylic/Capric triglyceride, Cetearyl alcohol, Glycerin, Xanthan gum, Sweet almond oil (Prunus amygdalus dulcis), Sesame seed oil (Sesamum indicum), Jojoba (Simmondsia chinensis) oil, Caprylyl glycol, Benzyl alcohol, Dehydroacetic acid.
Safety For topical use only. Patch test prior to full use. Discontinue if irritation occurs. Keep out of reach of children. Store below 30°C, away from direct sunlight.
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